Botanical garden
People, who ever they are no matter their age they love to enjoy their holiday in Botanical Garden (topic
sentence)
A. See
1. People can see so many plants in
botanical garden (major sentence)
a)
Grassy area
b) Tree, for
example bamboo tree, maple tree, willow, fir, palm,
c)
There are also so many flowers, for example: Rose,
daisy, orchid, primrose, cactus, poppy, buttercup.
2. People also can see the seller in
the front side of the garden.
a)
There are so many food seller for example : fried
rice, meat ball, soup
b) There are
also beverage seller, such as : cold drink, warm drink, and also soft drink
B. Do
1. People can spent their holiday by picnic with
the family
a)
While picnic, the children can play football
b) Also we
can take photo
c)
We also can enjoy the meal that we bring
d) Walking
around to see the panorama and plant collection
e)
Playing some game.
C. Taste
1. While enjoy the holiday here, we also can
taste some food.
a)
Taste the food while picnic
b) Taste the
freshness of fruit that the garden’s has, such as, strawberry, orange, watermelon,
mango
c)
We can taste the vegetables, likes : carrot, lettuce,
cucumber, broccoli.
D. Feel
1. People can feel comfortable during the
holiday here
a)
Cool situation
b) Fresh air
c)
Calm and relax situation
d) Great scenery
E. Hear
1. People become comfortable because they also
heard voices which bring happiness
a)
Bird’s voice
b) Kids who
playing around
To spend holiday in Botanical Garden is a pleasant. No matter their age, young or old, kids or adult they still have a happy time in Botanical Garden.
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