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Senin, 02 Desember 2013

Outline

Botanical garden
        People, who ever they are no matter their age they love to enjoy their holiday in Botanical Garden (topic sentence)
     A.  See
1. People can see so many plants in botanical garden (major sentence)
a)   Grassy area
b)  Tree, for example bamboo tree, maple tree, willow, fir, palm,
c)   There are also so many flowers, for example: Rose, daisy, orchid, primrose, cactus, poppy, buttercup.
2. People also can see the seller in the front side of the garden.
a)   There are so many food seller for example : fried rice, meat ball, soup
b)  There are also beverage seller, such as : cold drink, warm drink, and also soft drink
 B. Do
       1. People can spent their holiday by picnic with the family
a)   While picnic, the children can play football
b)  Also we can take photo
c)   We also can enjoy the meal that we bring
d)  Walking around to see the panorama and plant collection
e)   Playing some game.
      C. Taste
        1. While enjoy the holiday here, we also can taste some food.
a)   Taste the food while picnic
b)  Taste the freshness of fruit that the garden’s has, such as, strawberry, orange, watermelon, mango
c)   We can taste the vegetables, likes : carrot, lettuce, cucumber, broccoli.
       D. Feel
         1. People can feel comfortable during the holiday here
a)   Cool situation
b)  Fresh air
c)   Calm and relax situation
d)  Great scenery
        E.   Hear
         1.  People become comfortable because they also heard voices which  bring happiness 
a)   Bird’s voice
b)  Kids who playing around


 To spend holiday in Botanical Garden is a pleasant. No matter their age, young or old, kids or adult they still have a happy time in Botanical Garden.

1 komentar:

  1. This outline already has good development of idea. Make sure the topic sentence and the concluding sentence are relevant, not adding more new idea.
    People in the topic sentence can be specified.
    In developing the outline into draft, make sure it could give clear picture for the readers on the description of the controlling idea in the topic sentence.
    Good luck.

    BalasHapus