Who is the most important person in your life? Is that your
father? Why do you think you love him and respect him? Can you imagine if you
lost him in your life? How does he show his love to you? Does he influence your
life? What have you done to respect him? Each human of course have their most
important person in their life. My father is person who really important in my
life. He loves me every time since I was born. With his sincerity, he always takes
care of me. He seems like sun of my life. For me, there are 3 things that make him as
perfect father. He is really hard worker, good appearance and good personality.
To begin
with, my father is a hard worker man. He work in Surabaya and back home after a
week. He does that, because he wants to make his family to be happy. He worked
hard to buy food, pay for school of his children. Even though he back after a
week, he still love his family and always bring us something when his return.
My father really inspiring me and always motivated me. He told me that to be a
success person needs much spirit and hard work.
Second, my
father is a handsome man. Although now he is 45 years old, but he still look
handsome and charming. He is diligent to take care of his body and health. When
he returns from his work, she always does and exercises to keep his body stay
health. Besides he loves to do man’s treatment like body massage. He smart in
manage his time for himself. He also has great time to take a holiday to avoid
stress. That’s why he still looks interesting.
Third, my
father has good personality. My father is a friendly man. He always smiles to
people around him. He also has good time to talk together with his neighbor. He
always tried to build good relationship. Every day he gives money pocket for
children who play with my younger sister, or sometimes give them ice cream.
Besides, my father loves to help his neighbor who get problem. As I remember,
my father help my neighbor to bring him to the hospital when he got sick and he
pay for the cost. I feel so lucky to be his daughter.
My father is
just one example how to be good father. Family does not always need money, but
they also need care and happiness. My father completed what his family needed.
He worked hard for his family and be a good person. Besides, she always has
time for himself. I love my father so much. He seems like sun in my life. I
can’t imagine if I lost him in my life. He is perfect man for now and forever.
Good introduction. good content and also the organizer.
BalasHapusI can't say anything but you did a good job angga.
good story angga,,,, parents is our real hero id the most important person in our life.
BalasHapusyou have a good mechanic and organization,,,
fighting,,,
Good job Angga...
BalasHapusI love your writing...
you're lucky having a father like him,,,
But, in the last paragraph "Besides, she always has time for himself." should be
"Besides, he always has time for himself." because your father is a man.
Overall, your writing is interesting...
keep working...