"Free Hug" Care, Love and peace

(Final Result)

There was a man holding a banner and walking around public area and he would do a “free hug” campaign to show how a humanity is important nowadays. We should realized as a human, we cannot live alone. All of us need caring, loving each other no matter who ever they are. He want people around that place join the campaign. By giving a hug sincerely and it continue to other people.

At first everybody was careless with what the man did. People didn’t want to follow the campaign. They just look at the man strangely. Even though he didn’t get any response, he keep walking and tried to catch people’s attention. He didn’t give up and still continue his mission.

After that, a wan was looking at him. She approached the man and see what he brought. She then give him a hug sincerely. She hug the man which mean she want to join the campaign. After she give him a hug, they successfully catch people’s attention. Everybody join the campaign and give free hug each other. After everybody look so happy to do the campaign, a disappointment was happen to him. Police banned the campaign. It is because he disturb another pedestrian. 

He didn’t want to stop the campaign. He continue the campaign by giving a proof that the campaign is important. He invite people to give him a signature. Then, people give their signature one by one. Unbelievable, he got 10.000 signature. The signature is the proof, a proof that people need love, care peace to all people from the entire world.

Police couldn’t stop the campaign. Everybody look so happy during the campaign. They feel love, peace, care and togetherness can built just by doing a simple thing. Finally I want to give my point of view for the campaign. I feel this campaign bring great moral value. So starting from now on, let us be confident by giving simple act to make our life better. Will you do the campaign with the people around you?

My journey, My Lovely story

This is my story about my lovely holiday. I love holiday very much, of course everyone too. I s usually spent my holiday time to go to my favorite places. My favorite place is that place which has beautiful panorama. As I  what show in the picture, I was in Bedugul- Bali. This is my favorite place. It is because there are so many beautiful scenery in every corner in  that place. Let us say, grassy area that make us feel so refresh.There are also so many colorful flower which so beautiful and nice to take photo with that.The other thing that make me amaze is that the fresh air and always make me fresh and feeling calm. There are also a large lake which the water is so cold make us feel breezing like touch an ice.
This is my story of my holiday, so where will you go to spend your holiday time ?

This is my outline

Name   : Kadek Angga AndrianiNIM    : 1212021144Class    : 3B 

This man holds a “free hugs” sign and walked in the middle of the street. He was wearing a trouser and a coat.  For a man, his hair is too long. He also has a thick mustache and beard. It’s makes people didn't want to get closer to him. People there only looked at him, sometimes they smile and took his picture. At first, I think the man with the sign in his hand was so frustrated and little bit hopeless. We can see it from the black and white screen at the beginning. People were passing by, but this man never stop to try, whenever no one respect to him.When he was being careless, an old woman approached him and asked about what he did. The man spontaneously kneeling and offering a hug with his stretched out arms. The old woman immediately greeted with a hug. The grandmother successfully attracts the attention of other people to this man. And then, so many people want to cuddle with this man, even a guy with a serious face did the same.Because of this man, the street became a little bit crowded. Because, everybody stopped for a while to see this campaign. Then, the policeman came and banned this campaign directly. Because the policeman thought that the campaign disturbed another pedestrian at that place. The man explained it patiently to the policeman. He never gave up and continued his campaign with different way. He offered a hug to everybody and asked that participants to give their signature as the petition of this campaign. People became more respect to this man and helped this man with their pleasure. Unbelievable, he got 10,000 signatures from the participants.At the end of the video, everybody looked very happy. They embraced to each other, include the policeman. The policeman can’t do anything, because this campaign already supported by 10,000 people and it’s not such kind of criminalization.I think, the main point of this video is how we respect each other and love our environment. Although it looks very simple, actually hugs have many benefits, both for health or relationship between human beings. Just because a hug, people in the video became more respect to each other. Caring is the first step of creating peace and happiness. So, we have to reduce our individual attitude to produce more smiles in this world.(written by : Taharyanti)         

 This is the outline of what Yanti’s Posted, I examine the sentence starting from topic sentence, and the continue with major sentence, there are also some minor sentence that I found but not all major sentence has minor sentence, maybe it’s not really needed :

 1.      This man holds “free hugs” sign and walking in the middle of the street(Topic sentence)
 2.      Describe the man’s appearance :
ü  Wearing trouser and coat
ü  Long hair
ü  thick mustache and beard3.      No one care with him
ü  Just give him smile or take pictures
ü  He continue walking, even tough no one respect him
 4.      He become little bit frustrated
 5.      The man didn't give up
 6.      Old woman approach him, and give him a hug
 7.      The man offering a hug with his stretched out arms

 8.      This situation was attract other people to do the same

 9.      The street become crowded
ü  Everybody were stopped and give him huge
10.  The police banned the campaign
11.  He explain to the police patiently
12.  He keep going to do the campaign
13.  He ask people to participate by give him a signature
14.  He got 10.000 signature
15.  Main point of the campaign
ü  Everybody looks happy
ü  It is important to respect each other and love our environment
ü  Care and respect is the source of peace and happiness